Someday

Someday

A Poem by Ray

The insatiable nothing
at the pit of my stomach is stagnant,
for emptiness is a lack thereof feeling.

My heart clamours, but
the beat is estinto. My thoughts are
scattered, I stare up at the ceiling.

Pondering my state of being,
the purpose, my reason; I wonder
if this is all worth it.

Days pass me by, and
in years if I try, can I hope
to understand it someday?

© 2022 Ray


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I know that feeling all too well. When your thoughts don't make sense in the moment, you feel anxious, heart beating fast, somewhat in a state of confusion. Will it ever make sense? Perhaps, someday it will. Excellently worded, I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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amazing ..i just loved it ..nd the words that you have used its great!.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's definitely talking about some stuff that I think'll be felt and talked about for a long time to come.

Very cool how you can turn an anxiousness into a form of art.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know that feeling all too well. When your thoughts don't make sense in the moment, you feel anxious, heart beating fast, somewhat in a state of confusion. Will it ever make sense? Perhaps, someday it will. Excellently worded, I enjoyed reading this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Wanting to roam the earth unseen; hoping to become someone worth remembering. Can the two desires coexist? more..

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Drych Drych

A Poem by Ray