Justice in seeing

tried something new

In thine eyes i breathe sun,  pure ever so radiant 

a warm glow contained in knowing 

for in thine eyes but a respite 

for a weary heart

peace lies in  words of belief

and truth lies at the hearts of the words within

and so justice in seeing

in thine eyes..

Author's Note

going to try to write more often feeling great lately so they are most likely going to be very upbeat

Reviews

[thaleeyaLuna]

A beautifully expressed poem. . . :)
From the way I interpreted it (though I'm not sure if I'm right), this poems speaks of the peace, fulfillment, and happiness of being loved in return. And I wold agree. That feeling's on of the most uplifting feelings one could perceive.
That's how I saw it. :) But it would be kind of you to tell its true meaning.
Thanks for inviting me to read! :) I'm glad you are also finding other types of feelings to convey through your poems.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

you are indeed right in that interpretation but that is only part of it i was also speaking about how it truly matters not if that was the intention what matters is how you perceive things and not the inherently placed value on all feelings so for someone who sees someone as radiant and loving even if others do not it really does not matter because that person sees a value even if they themselves don't see it or if not is really there in the first place they are truly radiant on just that belief alone in someones world sorry for this terrible explanation better at figurative language but i am so glad you liked the poem and yeah i am feeling great ! (:

[thaleeyaLuna]

Don't worry, you explained it well. That was very nice indeed. :)

[Nemophilist Meraki]

In my head, this poem feels so relaxed, and calm. It feels full of a content kind of happiness. It's awesome to see you writing with new emotions in your poems! It shows that regardless of what you're feeling you are magnificent at expressing it. :)
Especially an idea as delicate as perspective. I find it's a very gentle subject that requires a lot of skill to express properly, considering it changes with each and every person. But you did a beautiful job.
Thank you for sharing!

[T. Edana Talbott]

I;m so happy you're feeling well! Can't wait to read more lovely pieces from you!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i wish i could say i am still feeling great but thank you for saying it is lovely means alot (:

[Pink Pastel]

This sounds like a ancient scroll nicely done

[TheAimlessWanderer]

never thought of it that way love new perspective thanks for reading (:

[Pink Pastel]

You're welcome

[iamshadowine]

WOW! This is a brilliant one!
"In thine eyes i breathe sun,"
I love this line so much, I don't know what made you think this!
Great job!
keep writing :D

[TheAimlessWanderer]

THANK YOU SO MUCH I WILL KEEP WRITING !!! GLAD YOU LOVED IT (:

[Akshita]

God! It is a beautifully peaceful poem. Her eyes must be truly beautiful and innocent. : )

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you so much glad you liked it ! i am bad at conveying my feelings to people glad you found it beautiful and peaceful (:

[Ookpik]

Very nice read : ) well done 👍

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thanks glad you enjoyed it (:

[Sapientiam]

The meaning in this is complex, yet, elegantly woven together. Even though I can't completely understand this, it's still beautiful, indeed. Wonderful job!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you very much i will leave this one a mystery until someones guesses it (: more fun