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A Poem by da_great
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ba-dump (tick)... ba-dump (tack)

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. . .

Every beat of our hearts
Will tell us that we are just
Another piece of an art

And each is with an hourglass
Without knowing when the sands will last

. . .

© 2020 da_great


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I like how you compared the beat of our hearts with the hourglass

Posted 4 Years Ago


da_great

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Well, that was just a sudden realization though. A sudden inspiration...
The physical being is indeed, another piece of art (but a very sophisticated one). As such, it has an expiration date, but as stated here in the apt symbol of the hourglass, one which is unknown. Thus it would behoove all of us creations to look inward to find out if the container is all there is.

Posted 4 Years Ago


da_great

4 Years Ago

Yeah and but I'm not ready to find that out. Maybe I'm a little scared of what my future would becom.. read more

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Added on August 11, 2020
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da_great
da_great

Mandaue, 7, Philippines



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A front-end developer who loves to pause when something/someone suddenly inspires me to think about writing a poem. more..

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