Not a Love but a Pondering Poem

When suddenly you realize that your significant other is as wonderful as nature's beauty.

What is more precious?

Is it the sunset or sunrise?

The moon and stars in the night sky?

Or that special person by your side,

Who is together with you

To witness these beautiful sights.

What is more mesmerizing?

Is it the rainbow over the horizon?

Or that eye catching skyline?

Or the hand of that special person,

Who will surely hold you

For a lifetime.

Author's Note

first time writing a poem on this site, hoping some advice

Reviews

[Nariko]

I am no poem expert. I don't have much experience writing poems but from what I saw so far, I think you're doing a great job! I like the way you express the words in your poems. It was easy to understand what you're trying to get across to the reader. I tend to have trouble understanding what most poems try to convey. But yours is simple and sweet! And yes, I believe that when you see wonderful sights with your significant other, it makes things seem even more beautiful!

[da_great]

Thank you for the compliments. Yup I agree with you, everything would be more interesting if your other half is always there with you. Cheers :))