without you

this is a poem my friend and i wrote

tears of black running down my face

a whole thirty days gone to wast

every day i was thinking of you

but you were only thinking about her

i thought our love was true

but it ment nothing to you

though i was right

guess i was wrong

now i have to learn to be strong

i was to sweet to see past your lies

you left me alone to cry

after days of only thinking about you

i decided to put you in my past

now i am standing tall,

holding my head high

my heart is locked away

and you will never breack it again

because i am so much better without you

Author's Note

please ignor all grammer problems and tell us what you honestly think
we wrote this after my friend went thrugh a rough break up, and now she really is holding her head high

Reviews

[Angelic_Dreamer]

this is really sad but pretty good!I read ur profile and I kinda can relate 2 how ur feeling.