Thrilling Escape

Journey to escape.

Journey to recreate .

Journey to explore the landscape.

A journey to learn your fate.

Curiosity endlessly breeds within, attention grazes its surroundings like a buffalo in the prairie, the excitement cannot be harnessed.

Heavens are boundless, future is hazy, determination administers shots of adrenaline, that keep you moving forward. Swimming in the scenery, chasing serenity.

Driving faster en route to the unknown, searching for warm embrace, a point to rest safely. A little further, almost there.

Journey to escape.

Journey to recreate .

Journey explore the landscape.

A journey to learn your fate.

 

Reviews

[Ovi-Odiete]

Intense and Sweet...
Nice poem...

[Phillip Francis]

Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

[Ovi-Odiete]

My pleasure...

[softlyfall]

Wow...is it clear to you how much more impact this has?
Excellent edit

[Phillip Francis]

I absolutely do. This was a good lesson, and I appreciate your time to not only read my work, but also provide constructive criticism, which provided strength to an inferior poem.

[softlyfall]

Any time, really, just ask

[Phillip Francis]

Thank you.

[softlyfall]

These are lyrics not a poem and not extremely good lyrics but a great poem is in there

[softlyfall]

Sigh.
Will you do a favor for me if I promise to faithfully help you find the real poet in you?
Rewrite without saying take even once and limit the use of "the"

[Phillip Francis]

Thank you for your honest insight. I've made some edits per your suggestions. Please feel free to re-evaluate.