Looking out my Window

Looking out my window

I question my existence,

Wondering why it is I am here,

My dog growls at the dishwasher and seems not to care he lives a life of such monotony,

Am I the only one who cares?

Staring at my coffee in The Goonies mug, I question the little things yet never the big

Maybe I have too much time on my hands,

Guess I should get a hobby

Reviews

[Lisasview]

I think under the fun wording these words of yours are actually rather quite sad...
Being bored and feeling there is nothing to do... yes, a hobby...something that inspires you might be the answer? Seems that writing might be a good hobby for you...
Most of us question our existence...
I actually could visualise being in the kitchen with you...as your words were so descriptive.
I only recently started submitting and actually submitted a few poems I wrote when I was 20 in 1970..
You might enjoy reading some of mine..There is quite a difference between Screams written in 1970 and Fields,, written recently.

Lisa, now in Spain

[Riley]

I appreciate your feedback :) I would love that, please feel free to send me a message.

[Lisasview]

If you click on me under writers on line now you will find all my poems...
Do you see it?
read moreIf you click on me under writers on line now you will find all my poems...
Do you see it?
Lisa

[Franky]

Im not sure if you were aiming for this but.....that made me laugh.

I question the little things too. I shouldn't but it comes naturally I guess.

[Chris]

Chuckling here... sometimes miss a hobby is what a life may become.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I liked your style how u tell of your patterned coffee cup. AnD your Dog growling at the dishwasher love this Love these little details one can picture the scene

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Crochet it’s a great stress relief

[LostBoy]

The tone of the second stanza is from where you'd expand. Guess we should all get a hobby. .

[sheandherself]

Wow. Extremely relateable, yet written so well and so f***ing originaly. I'm loving this.

[Pete]

If you find the answer, kindly let me know because I've been wondering the same thing. Nice thought. Good observation.

[Riley]

Can do, if you find it before me please share too

[Zugzwang]

You've managed to express something deep, powerful and poignant.
We all have times of doubt and sometimes the hard times are very hard indeed.
I really liked this write.
z.

[wordman]

i guess we all have had doubts at one time or another