Him

Feeling as though I might throw-up,
I feel like I'm burning up and my neck has set aflame,
dizzy and weak
so vulnerable in his presence 
I see him everyday yet these feelings I have stay
to him I'm disposable, usable, and abuse-able
he is the shadow I jump at, the cold chill stinging my spine,
the monster in my closet,
the demon under my bed,
he is my fright
he is my evil
he is the darkness I long to light
he is the past I wish I could blow away
get covered with leaves, at least for a day
so that I may soar, high in the sky,
too far away for only a day

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Sounds like you have feelings for a bad guy. At least i think thats what this piece is about.
My advice is to stay away from this guy.

Anyway this piece was indeed powerful, very deep, emotional and meaningful.
Was written out quite well :)
Great write :)

[terry smith]

dig a hole put him in it so he knows what you think of him then drive baby drive...

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Powerful! What you write I am sure many would like to be able to share. I love this piece even though it makes me sad and angry at the same time. Great write!