dancing in the rain

this is just a song. about a boy. who's a friend. but i like him more than that.

Dancing In The Rain

 

do you see me starin at you in the halls?.

i see you turn your head when my name's called.

i know you see me carryin all my stuff

sometimes i wanna drop it just to see if you'll pick it up.

 

well...

(chorus)

I want you to know.

When i wave hello.

it's not just a casual wave

it's me tryin to brave.

you'll think i'm insane

i'm tellin you this is no game boy.

i wanna dance with you in the rain.

 

(regular)

i write your name all over my books.

i think you might have noticed.

there's more everytime you look.

 

i'm not done

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Emmmaaa! ;D]

This was really catchy, and I love it. Really good job. (:

[Mandi (nothing else)]

the me tryin to be brave part is,
i have so much love for him i can barely speak.
so i step up and try and pull myself together.
but i still get the butterflies just when i wave.
and that's all i can force myself to do is wave

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

I like it so far. It has perfect potential.

One line that doesn't settle with me well, though, is;
"it's me tryin to brave"
I don't quite understand what you mean by this. ?