Everytime I look at you

A poem about moments in life where everything you have is your own mirror.

Everytime I do look at you,

You do look back at me;

Behind silent ice you stand

Just to stare sometime at me.

And if I try to follow you,

You vanish like a rainbow.

Leaving my heart in sorrow...

Sometimes I say I must forget

And you I shouldn't get,

For in every thing I draw or

Write, it's you I write about.

It makes the world's honor

to me, when you say or shout:

"I want to stand in your line

Never in life your love decline.

The love I always felt for you

Was pure and much more true,

Than all the countless screams!"

If I run, inside my dreams,

It's you I wanna hurry to.

Finally I'm there all alone

With no friend to talk to.

Never again make that mistake,

And confess to your own clone!

Reviews

[Lord Da Crownsmeyer]

Thank u Dom!!! ur sweet and lovely :D:D:D

[Dom Macchiaroli]

I liked this piece a lot. My fave line:

"I want to stand in your line
Never in life your love decline.

this is really good. Congrats!

[Lord Da Crownsmeyer]

Thank you Corey...:D:D:D

[Crowley]

So true, and wierdly, many people are not comfortable with what they see. Well written with some great wisdom that I think many can identify with. Nice job on this.