Eight Hour Blink

Eight Hour Blink

A Poem by Ben Taylor

Exhaustion
Slowly nibbles and
Gnaws
At my words
Until they become nothing;
The steady mastication
Of inspiration
Proceeds until the late night
Becomes the early morning,
And my consonants
Become confused.
The million wires of fatigue,
Thin as thought
And yet as heavy as my continued
Existence,
Draw me from this flickering screen--
It is time I said
Goodnight.

© 2011 Ben Taylor


Author's Note

Ben Taylor
So..I've been too tired to write lately (been working/etc. till quite late) and instead of just falling asleep tonight, I decided to write about how I'm too tired to write.
'Night. :)

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Very apt... just how i am feeling right now. Poetry can become so intense somtimes and it's so hard to just let it go and get some sleep... even when the words are fizzling into thin air and becoming 'nothing' that makes any sense any more. Excellently well expressed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is most excellent :D You project that heave weighted tired feeling so well. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I agree. I don't write much during the week because I am so worn out from school.
Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha, this was a good write. it explains exactly how i felt last night! x) nice job!
~gabbz

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Ben Taylor
Ben Taylor

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