Language Barrier

My second attempt at freestyle. :)

The bleeding, raw emotion

Contained in your vociferous

Complaint.

A freshly skinned sentiment

Uninfected with words

Or the rot of proper phrasing.

This dearth of articulation

Of linguistic refinement

You posses.

A hindrance of conveyance

Or a refinement of communication?

You

Would know better than I

With your virgin yowl

Unmolested by the desecration

Of literacy

A pure portrayal of feline

Dissatisfaction.

Author's Note

If you didn't figure it out from the poem, this was written about my cat. It basically contemplates the difficulty of communication, and debates whether emotion is really better conveyed through words, or if it would be better if just left as it is.

After I wrote it I pulled him out from from under my bed and informed him I had written a poem about him.
The irony was not lost on me. :)

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Such a delightful poem.. well constructed, beautiful use of language. Such a lucky cat ;)

[Judy Ponceby]

Well done! ^ . . ^ prrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. lol I believe I left this kitty fact out of my own kitty poems. :)