In a future where the United States is divided into three warring fractions, a special ops soldier from the East Coast searches for the answers to his father's disappearance.
This is my first story so expect tons and tons of grammar ans spelling mistakes. I have ideas swirling around in my head so the task of writing one down is reward enough.I will try to edit my work but expect the worst.
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Hey man, how's it goin? I just read a bit of your story and I want to say I like the premise and seems like a cool background. However, that being said, the formatting is not reader friendly haha! Without paragraph breaks and breaks in the dialogue, it becomes a bit of a chore to read and takes away from it. I will check out more later on, and keep an eye out for my first chapter I should have it uploaded by the end of the week.
Hey man, how's it goin? I just read a bit of your story and I want to say I like the premise and seems like a cool background. However, that being said, the formatting is not reader friendly haha! Without paragraph breaks and breaks in the dialogue, it becomes a bit of a chore to read and takes away from it. I will check out more later on, and keep an eye out for my first chapter I should have it uploaded by the end of the week.