A Joy

A Poem by dEj

A Joy

your every word
a single stroke
of hummingbirds wing

together inflight
they sing
and the hum
becomes a roar

dEj 10.15.07

© 2008 dEj

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Jaffa Forbes

very nice. you capture a lot in a few lines.
jaff

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blackbirdsong

Simple truths and simple beauty are the things which haunt me and which I also find most profound. I have heard the roar or hummingbirds. I purposely plant things which attract them and butterflies and they come in tiny roaring armies. This poem made me think of such times and I can do nothing but smile at the remembrance of them.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Musings of Mary H.

Such beauty that comes out of a few words! A delightful comparison of words and a single stroke of a hummingbird. Great work!

Mary

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 21, 2008
Last Updated on February 21, 2008

Author

dEj

Hawthorne, FL

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I as well enjoy creating visual art. The TalentDataBase Link here will take you to some of my sculptures, photography, masques, and woodcarvings. I hope you enjoy. I certainly did. .. more..