Part 1, Chapter 6, of RFV.A Chapter by Danny ZilSIX “I’ve got you under my circuits!” sang
Annie the Android on the air-mobile, “I’ve got you deep in the micro-chip of
me!...Well gents, how was the humiliation this time?” “ “ “One week,” Annie told him. “Hmm, not very long. What are you going to
do?” he asked “Stay. I’d rather die as an Albanian than
live as anything else.” “Prick,” muttered Annie. “Oh suit yourself,” Roger said, tired of
trying to persuade these doomed fanatics. The airmobile coasted along and Roger
looked out at the scenery awhile then something occurred to him. “So where did everybody go when they left
Earth?” he asked “They all went to different planets. Formed
themselves into separate new nations then picked a planet each and left.” “Why didn’t they all just go to the same
planet?” “Oh you know what it was like here before
they left. All the former nations arguing and bickering and threatening each
other. I’m surprised a few wars didn’t break out again. They decided that this
was the perfect opportunity for each faction to start anew on its own planet.
Thought that might avoid any more trouble so they all went their separate ways.” “What about my Mother, Amanda, Keith and Mr
Entwhistle?” “They joined the people setting up New
Earth. I’ll give you the space co-ordinates before you go.” “Okay, thanks.” “Some of the new nations left promotional
films back at the Control Room. Want to see them?” “May as well. Then I’m leaving.” “How’s that Computer of yours?” Annie asked
Roger. “Still taking the piss out of you?” Roger flushed. “Tell him Annie the Android says hello…and
goodbye.” “Sure,” Roger agreed. “Do you know my
Computer?” “Knew him when he was just a calculator. I
was a driver when he was just a graph on his father’s display unit.” “Well I’ll certainly pass on the message.” The airmobile reached the Control Room and
coasted down to a smooth landing. “Here we are, gents,” Annie announced. “The
Control Room. Please mind your seats when leaving your head.” Roger and Norman alighted and strolled over
to the dilapidated Control Room. “I’ll set up the films for you,” “Are you going to watch them?” He kicked some rubbish out of the way and
found Roger a seat in front of a wall screen. “So these are the promotional films certain
groups made to try to persuade other people to join them on their new planets?”
Roger asked, conveniently setting the scene for the next section. “That’s right,” Roger waved to him, settled into his chair
and waited for the show to start. The wall screen flickered a little then the
first film began to roll…… A smartly dressed, clean-cut young man is
sitting behind a desk. He has the unmarked unlined face of one who doesn’t
indulge in a great deal of cerebral activity. He smiles and reveals two rows of
perfect white teeth. “Hi!” he says. “I’m Donny Mormon and these
fine chaps standing behind me are my brothers.” The shot pulls back and it’s revealed that
Donny is not alone in this promotional film. Behind him and arranged by height
is a semi-circle of replicas with a ten year old at the end. Although there
must be a difference in ages it’s not apparent in the facial characteristics "
each has the same bland unlined face as Donny and each is sporting ‘the smile’.
The replicas introduce themselves heighabetically. “Hi!” says the tallest. “I’m Lenny.” Then, “I’m Benny.” “I’m Kenny.” “I’m Denny.” “And I’m little Jimmy Mormon!” the smallest
one says and throws out his arms in a showbiz-type gesture. The replicas laugh and clap. Even Donny
turns round and laughs. It’s obvious that little Jimmy is the humourist in the
group. Encouraged by the other’s laughter he tries the same line again. After
all if it made them laugh once it could make them laugh again. “And I’m little Jimmy Mormon!” he says,
throwing out his arms in a showbiz-type gesture. The gamble has been successful. The
replicas are doubled-up or are holding on to each other in hysterical laughter
at little Jimmy’s stunning brilliant witticisms. The camera zooms in for some
close-ups. Completely confident of their perfect teeth, the replicas mouths are
open in angles of gay abandonment which would have the ordinary person reeling
round the room with a dislocated jaw but which to these trapeze artists of the
smile is nothing, a mere limbering up exercise, after all, little Jimmy could
be witty again soon. Little Jimmy fools around a bit, does a few
showbiz-type steps then opens his mouth as if he’s going to say something else.
The older replicas straighten up and focus on him. Nothing happens. A blank look replaces the vacant look in
little Jimmy’s eyes and the astute viewer might correctly guess that humorous
ad-libbing does not feature in li’l Jim’s repertoire. With nothing happening inside his head except
for lonely nerve impulses frantically trying to contact each other, little
Jimmy cleverly slides his lips back over his teeth to reveal ‘the smile’. It’s a guaranteed winner and the replicas
laugh and clap at this stunning brilliant witticism. Now that the intros are over and the lads
have shown what a happy wholesome bunch they are, it’s time for the important
part of the film " The Message. Donny turns back to the camera and the shot
closes in on him. The smile has gone from his face. He’s looking serious or
rather he thinks he’s looking serious. Actually he only has two expressions "
smiling and not smiling but in that great unused cavern of his head, he thinks
he’s looking serious when all that’s really happened is that he’s stopped smiling. “I’d like to talk to you a little about us
and the planet we’re going to,” he says in a voice so syrupy it makes your
fillings ache. There is clapping behind his head from the
replicas. “We’re tired of all the promiscuity in the
modern world,” Donny goes on. “Things like wild parties, the devil’s loud rock
music, children born out of wedlock and men getting married just don’t appeal
to us. We want to get away from all that sort of filth.” Donny smiles. He looks as if he’s about to
impart some more breath-taking news. He is. “So we’re going to a brand new planet,” he
goes on, “and do you know what we’re going to call it?” At this point the astute viewer could
imagine the replicas behind Donny waiting to hear what the planet’s called.
They’ve been told several times already but cerebral retention doesn’t feature
in their repertoire. “We’re going to call our brand new planet UTAHPIA!”
Donny reveals. Clapping and cheering from behind his head.
Oh and lots of ‘smiles’. “Now there’s a lot of stuff we don’t want
on Utahpia. We don’t want alcohol or drugs or tobacco or gambling or pre-marital
intercourse, especially anything connected with unnecessary intercourse.” More clapping from the replicas. “So if we have no use for any of these
things I’ve mentioned, what are we going to do with ourselves?” “What indeed?” the astute viewer is
thinking, waiting with baited breath for the revelation. After all the major
obsessions of the human race have just been casually dismissed in a couple of
sentences. “There will be lots of things for us to do
on Utahpia,” Donny explains. “There’s building churches, praying, brushing our
teeth, religious studies, building more churches, oral hygiene and more religious
studies,” he tells us. “But it’s not going to be all work you know, we’re going
to have lots of fun because we’re taking our very own, very special, very funny
person with us. And do you know who that is?” ‘No,’ thinks the astute viewer. ‘We haven’t
met anyone like that yet.’ Then the penny drops. ‘Oh Christ!’ mutters the astute viewer,
probably head sinking into hands. “Do you know who that very special, very
funny person is?” Donny asks again because it’s obvious that the very special,
very funny person has missed his cue. “Hey, hey, hey!” pipes up little Jimmy from
behind Donny’s head, possibly after a prod from one of the replicas. “You’ve guessed!” Donny says, laughing.
“Our very own, very special, very talented laughter maker " little Jimmy Mormon!” One can imagine little Jimmy throwing out
his arms in a showbiz-type gesture at the very mention of his name. Something
like the Pavlov effect " little Jimmy’s name is mentioned and dogs throw out
their paws in a showbiz-type gesture. “So if this kind of lifestyle appeals to
you,” says Donny, “and I can’t imagine why it wouldn’t…” ‘Understandable,’ thinks the astute viewer,
accurately estimating the extremely narrow limits of Donny’s imagination. “…then why not come to Utahpia with us,”
Donny drivels on. “It’s the way God planned it.” The Message over, the camera pans back
slightly. Donny has stopped being serious but he’s not smiling although he
thinks he is. Inside that great shunting yard of his head, the smile synapse
has been derailed. The camera pans back further and the
replicas are all in the picture again. Little Jimmy’s looking as playful as
ever and there’s an air of expectancy about the group. Is he going to say it
again? Is he? He is. “And I’m little Jimmy Mormon!” he says,
throwing out his paws in a showbiz-type gesture. The others laugh and clap and let him have
his way. And why not? In a few years he will be grown up and characterless like
them instead of young and characterless as he is now. Amidst scenes of convulsive laughter and
hilarity at more of little Jimmy’s antics, the scene slowly darkens and the
voice-over comes on. “Utahpia,” says the voice. “The ideal world
for you, God and your teeth. The planet where you’ll feel no pain…and experience
no pleasure. Utahpia. Religious dentists welcome.” The scene fades. Roger shook his head. “It’ll probably be a
long way to Utahpia,” he mused then something occurred to him and he smiled.
“Never mind " they’ll have little Jimmy to keep them amused when they’re
travelling!” The next promotional film began to roll…… A man is sitting on a couch behind a coffee
table. He is wearing Hawaiian shorts, a garish multi-coloured t-shirt, a straw
hat and is half drunk. A make-up girl comes on and starts powdering his face.
As she bends over him he reaches out and fondles her large b***s. She screams
and rushes off. The man laughs and opens a can of lager. It fizzes up, spraying
some of the contents over his face and t-shirt. “Not a bad pair on that sheila!” he remarks
then drains most of the lager. “Hi cobbers!” he says. “Ma name’s Sydney
Queensland an Ah’d like to tell yer about the planet me an ma mates is goin to.
It’s gonna be made up of all the sporty, drinkin, partyin people who used to
come from “Any more laga in the house?” he asks. From off camera somebody throws him a can.
He tries to catch it but fumbles and drops it in his lap. “Strewth fellas, almost damaged the
President de Gauls there!” He opens the can and drains half of it. “Well what kinda people do we want on
Anuz?” he says, drawing his arm across his mouth. “If you like sport, parties,
barbies an sheilas with big knockas then you’re the sorta guy we’re lookin for.
You see we wanna have the best rugby an cricket teams in the Universe. An we’ll
get them. Know why? Cos we’ve got some crackin players already an we’re gonna
get lots more an they’ll all be livin an trainin under ideal conditions " no
intellectual distractions whatsoever!” He finishes the lager and tosses the can
over his shoulder again. “Any more, fellas?” he asks. “An watch the
sheila bait this time!” The make-up girl rushes on and puts a can
on the table. She stays well out of his reach. “So if you’re interested in sport come
along to Anuz with us. We’ll make a man outa you " especially if you’re a
woman!” He laughs and finishes the lager then tries
to stand up but has to grab the coffee table for support. “But we don’t want any of you English pommy
barstards comin!” he shouts, swaying from side to side. “An we don’t want you
tryin to dump any of yer criminal rubbish on our new planet like yer did to “An Ah’ll tell yer somethin else!” he
yells, only his head in the picture. “Ya poofy Brit barstards!” He staggers up
and stumbles towards the camera. “Ya f****n limey bumboys” he rants, still
weaving towards the camera. He steadies himself and draws back his foot. It
swings erratically upwards, there is a thump followed by the sounds of breaking
glass and the film ends abruptly. “I’ve brought you some coffee,” a paint
spattered “Thank you,” Roger said stiffly. “What’s up?” “I’m being huffy because I’m the main
character in the story and I’ve hardly been mentioned for several pages now,”
Roger told him. The screen remained black awhile then
slowly started to brighten and a figure is dramatically silhouetted sitting in
a high-backed armchair. The picture lightens completely and a smiling elderly
man is revealed. He is wearing an expensive dark blue pin-stripe suit, white
shirt and tie. He has silver hair and a small neat silvery moustache. “Hello,” he says in a very clipped upper
class accent. “I’m Sir Edward Singen-Kydd and I’m here to tell you about
CONPART, the planet all we people from the old Conservative Party are going
to.” Sir Edward casually crosses one expensively
suited leg over the other. He is relaxed and in control because he’s no stranger
to this type of situation " bullshiting on television while completely
believing it’s the truth. “So what will it be like on Conpart I hear
you ask? What can I look forward to? After all, going to a new planet and
possibly a different way of life could be a bit of a shock " which is why I
know you’ll like Conpart. You see we’ve decided to recreate conditions exactly
as they were here. There will be an unbridgeable financial gap between you and
us, fairly high unemployment, continually dropping living standards and every
now and again we’ll organise the odd war against a neighbouring planet which
will make you feel really patriotic and in which a lot of you will die totally
unnecessarily.” The proles are now hooked. The dazzling
carrot of repetitiveness has been dangled in front of them. Sir Edward
consolidates. “So what type of people are we looking for
on Conpart? Why the same type we had under us in the old Conservative
government " people who don’t mind being manipulated, people who don’t know
they’re being manipulated and people who don’t mind who does their thinking for
them.” Sir Edward smiles. Like his hair, the smile
is real. Like his hair, the smile’s not his but it’s real. “I’m sure by now a lot of you will be
interested in Conpart and might well be asking yourself, ‘Do I measure up? Will
they accept me if I want to go?’ Well let me allay your fears by asking you
this simple question " is your age higher than your IQ? If the answer is yes
then consider yourself a prospective Conpartee.” Sir Edward crosses one expensively suited
smile over the other. “Will I get anything I’m used to on Conpart
I hear you ask? Will there be anything the same? Of course there will. Take
newspapers for instance. We’ve a special newspaper all ready for you, just like
the ones you had here " several pages of young ladies with very large breasts,
several pages of sport, several pages of TV and most importantly, just enough
news to keep you misinformed. After all we don’t want you worrying about things
like the state of the planet, badly planned government spending, enormous
salaries for elderly poofters like me or any of the other main issues, do we
now?” Sir Edward crosses one expensively suited
lie over the other. “And what of things like law and order, I
hear you ask? Well on Conpart we’ve decided on the no nonsense approach "
anybody caught parking on a double yellow line will be hung. Second offenders
will receive harsher punishment, as will their parents. Tough on crime and
tough on the breeders of criminals " that’s one of our mottos and I’m sure you’ll
probably agree. Sir Edward adjusts the creases on his
three-piece, pin stripe smile. “So that’s Conpart for you. The planet
where you’ll get exactly the same as you got here " not very much. Don’t worry
about it though, we know that’s the way most of you want it anyway, you
ineffectual collection of molecules. However that’s just a personal opinion and
I’m just an elderly poof.” Sir Edward smiles. “But I’m an elderly poof with
power. Goodnight.” The picture darkens slowly until only Sir Edward’s
silhouette is visible. The voice over comes on. “Conpart " the
planet where you’ll feel at home…but never get one. Conpart " the planet that
proves there’s two sides to every Tory. Conpart " a whole new dimension in repetitiveness
and exploitation.” The silhouette and voice-over fade. Right on cue, “Not really,” Roger replied. “So you don’t feel like joining any of them?” Roger shook his head. “Where will you go then?” “Probably to New Earth to see Amanda and
the others. Why don’t you come along with me?” “No thanks,” “So you’re staying?” “It’s an honour.” “Well I might as well go just now then if I
can’t change your mind.” “Righto,” “Exit Visa? What’s that?” “Same as your Entry Visa only you need this
one to leave.” “Oh don’t tell me we’re going through all
that again,” Roger said irritated. “You are joking, aren’t you?” “Aren’t you?” Roger repeated. “Aren’t I what, sir?” “Aren’t you joking about the Exit Visa? Now
look, don’t start all that ‘sir’ bit either,” Roger said crossly. “I’m not a
complete fool you know.” “It’s not likely to, is it?” Roger said, moving
towards the door. “What d’you mean, sir, not likely to?” “Well, the Black Cloud,” Roger reminded him.
“Earth’s going to be destroyed.” Roger looked searchingly at “The planet’s going to be destroyed,” ‘He’s going nuts,’ Roger thought, edging
nearer the door. ‘Probably spent too much time on his own. He thinks there’s
somebody else there. I’m leaving.’ He
smiled and nodded at “So he thinks the planet’s going to be
destroyed?” a voice said from next to “I thought that ever since he landed,” “Nuts, I’d say,” his friend answered. “Think so?” “Yeah, definitely. Look at those slippers
he’s wearing.” He laughed. “Lovely, aren’t they?” A minute later, Roger’s Ship lifted. “Poor bugger,” He watched till the Ship went out of sight
then strolled through to the Control Room’s small kitchen. “Ah well, tea time,” he said, rubbing his
hands together. “I think there are a couple of nice chops in the fridge.” “Chops?” his friend said. “We had chops
last night.” “Did we? Yes you’re right. What do you feel
like then?” “Hmmm…how about some scrambled eggs?” “Scrambled eggs? Alright,” “For two.” “For two,” “Yeah,” agreed his friend. “Don’t know who
I’d talk to if you weren’t here.” “Me neither,” © 2012 Danny Zil |
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