Stolen Kisses

Stolen kisses are not stolen if they are freely given and excepted

Each kisses Joy and sorrow were in her eyes echoed

The dark crowd around and wall of sound our voices drowned

As we drowned our voices in our eyes with goodbyes

Reviews

[PasDeChat]

how about stolen nibbles?

Interesting. I like the form. single thought on each line touching on the other lines. if I may, try to expand line two, just one or two words. And line three seems choppy to me, I got it but it seemed to interrupt an otherwise beautiful piece of writing. Just my opinion.