Lead Me

I didn't use to think of death,

but you bought me there,

I was facing death,

alone... cause you weren't here,

I couldn't see your face,

fill with confident and proud,

I couldn't gain strength,

without you there.

I didn't use to think of death,

but you bought me there,

and then you were gone,

left me hopeless,

but I couldn't blame you,

you had your own business,

I was weak and fragile,

only if I am lost,

without you there.

Please do come back,

I didn't know how,

was I going to stop breaking,

how was I supposed,

not to break,

without you there.

Would you tell me where you were?

Just give me some strength,

to lead me far far away,

from the darkness...

Author's Note

Something I think of, without a reason...

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

ooo.. i really like this. I can feel the pain through the words here..
yeah..its hard when that person we need the most in our life isn't there to support us. But we seek strength either way. The longness for someone is very well shown. Great poem!

[FallenHeroXx]

Really good.. I enjoyed it.. I really felt that poem connection.. I can relate so much.. Nice write.

Fallen

[Maureen Mwaniki]

It has a disjointed sort of flow,like you couldnt be botherd to rhyme just let your thoughts flow..i like the emotion in it!and yes some people disapear when you need them most!i like it