Just Stop it, liar

what's happening to me?

I have no idea what's going on,

can you please tell me?

Why can't you?

I thought you said,

you'll be there,

whenever I need you!

No,

I figure it out,

you're a liar,

I know that now,

so stop lying to me,

I have had enough with your lies.

Stop explaining why you did that,

it is really stupid and useless,

you can't always get back,

what you loose and regret,

face it,

l-i-a-r.

Just stop.

Author's Note

I have had enough with lies and stuff, I got enough with that, it hurts me TOO much!

Reviews

[Karina Longo]

I know where you come from! I've been dealing myself with a case of sick, sad stalking/obssesion and fake accusasions. Some people are evil and hurt us without a logic reason. I can connect with this piece - full of feelings and sadness.
I'm sorry for whatever happened to you.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Lying hurts the one being lied to, and in the end the one who lied as well!! Great poem

[KAREN]

Strong heartfelt poem!

[A Risen Heroine.]

I can relate to this.. it's so f*****g painful when someone tells you they're there, but in the end, you just can't find them...
This is a really good job and thank you for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[Loner]

I agree with u my dear i hate lies too . A great piece.

[Sunflower 20]

very emotional peice. i think everyone at one stage of their life has to deal with a liar, and you expressed the frustration and anger very nicely.
but the flow could be better, however, i think it adds the feeling of frustration. overall, well done!

[Midday_Mystery]

That is a good write and you should never have to be lied too, good job....

[Midnight_Mystery]

i can totally relate! great write!

[Calypso]

guys are liars and jerks, I'll agree.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. I told my children one lie will lead you to more lies. Then you will get twisted up and won't know the truth anymore. I don't like liar either. Better to face the truth and learn from mistakes. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

This is soo true!!!!!!! This is a great poem!!! I bet there's a ton of people, including me:), who feel exactlylike you do!!! Great job!!