Did You?

I tried to tell you the truth,

how it torn my heart,

and broke it in little pieces.

You stepped on it hardly,

and I screamed,

I yelled sharp,

my voice torn already,

but you didn't care,

you care about yourself,

you care what's good for you,

you never remember me,

did you?

I found hard to go away,

caused you're always the one,

who I supposed to love,

while I was the one,

who you should love,

you ignored the truth,

left me torn,

left me crying,

you left me,

did you?

I forgot when you went away,

all I remembered was the pain,

how painful was it when you went away,

how it hurt me, so much,

that I hated it much as well,

you did know what you're doing,

did you?

Did you know you  hurt me?

Did you?

Author's Note

Well, another pop in head poem, don't really sure why I write it actually :(
Maybe is because someday today, my classmates kept laughing at me, and it did helps me think of.. 'this'

Reviews

[Siddhartha]

a beautiful poem....rhetorical in its tone and cadence...

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Julie Beth]

this was great good job :)

[OT]

some of the best poems I've read have been ones which just come out of the blue - grab the inspiration and work with it! this is a nice poem here! it has a poignant feel to it - sadness "did you know you hurt me" - great! I think you mean "tore" not "torn" in the second line - and then sorted!!

[Ashley Myers]

this reminda me of a lot of my exes. always willing to do things for themselves and just be completely selfish and then forget that i even exist. men are pigs

[Loner]

Awesome write and a pleasure to read.

[Midday_Mystery]

This is a great piece and Those people that tease you know nothing. you are a wonderful talented person and they are just scared of you because you are! You are always keen at expressing your self so remarkably in the verse and it is a terrific write. Take care not to let them get to you... It only lets them win! A 100/100 poem in my book!

[Calypso]

Love sucks. I never have much luck either.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I believe better to leave people you have hurt alone. Appearance of the person who pissed you off. Could start the flow of bad emotion. A very strong story in your poem. I like the ending. When you go back and see the damage done to another. Even the bad person can feel sadness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A]

Oh sad :(
very emotive poem, I liked the flow, the best thing about writing is it gives you space to express what ever it is that you feel rather than having to say it in a conversation, very touching really I hope it all ( sad feelings ) went away by now.
Great write! :))