I Love U, speech finish

You thought I was afraid of you,

you thought I was freaked out.

I was not,

I was afraid I would loose you,

I was freaked out 

caused I thought you would leave me.

Why didn't you understand?

I was only scared,

i was only freaked out,

that I would loose you?

Why wouldn't you understand a bit?

I wanted you to be with me,

I wanted you more than anything,

anything in this world,

anyone in this galaxy.

I just...

couldn't leave you,

not if you wanted to,

tear me apart.

Author's Note

Something come up in mind lately...

p.s. its no true ( I'm only saying this cause my classmates are on here and I afraid they will make fun of it!)

Reviews

[Where the night sky and..]

I think there are a few words I would choose differently but a very common feeling. Good job :]

[Karina Longo]

I can relate a lot to your poem, I think it tells a lot about insecurity, about how difficult it is to express feelings sometimes - especially love, the greatest of them all. We love so much because we are so scared to lose them. Beautiful message, very personal too, I'd say. I really like it, it's awesome.

[Linear]

They should not make fun of this, it's a good piece of literary artistry....and I liked it

[Sweets]

Just ignore everything your classmates say about it ._.
It's wonderful!
Great write!

[Magdelena]

Grrrrr, tell your classmates to go blah blah.. lol This was great!!!

Mags xx

[Short.Nerd]

Great job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great work! Feelings flowed as well as the poem!

[hannajade]

your classmates better not make fun of this--it is great!! :D

[Sunflower 20]

i really like the repetitivness in the first 3 stanzas, it really set this poem with a panicing feeling driving it. well done :)

[KAREN]

Good expression of emotions!