Falling Down with the Fall

Fall, I was falling down, along with the falling leaves. Everything was falling… Everyone is falling…

 

Walking under the fall, with leaves, lonely and slowly falling down, tears streamed down. I blinked hard, trying to control my tears, but… I couldn’t. Fall, everything around me was falling; there were no more lives with happy faces…

 

The Earth was dead, no more hope, no more light. Human chose to abandon this Earth, they dumped it. Throwing rubbishes everywhere, they dumped this Earth, they did, I saw it, I saw this Earth dying.

 

Human had gone away from earth one by one without any tears, without any loving to this Earth. They chopped down every tree, everything green, there was only one place. One place which human hadn’t destroyed. It was here, where the last ten precious trees were planted.

 

I had planted them my own. With my very own hands while I was crying. My tears were the only way to give them nutrition; the water was all burned out at Earth.

 

Earth was destroyed, completely, by its owners hand, the endless destroying by throwing rubbishes, polluting it with oil and co2. Conclusion, destroyed

 

The human deserved this, but the green didn’t, they were innocence, they were here to help.. but now… human destroyed it, all…

 

Along with the fall, while I was falling, everything, everyone was falling. I Fell.

Author's Note

What do you think? You got to tell me, I am new in this topic :(

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

I like this poem, Cynthia! It's is one of the best pieces of poem I've read from you so far. It's really a amazing and fabulous mind from you. It's a really fantastic story, I'll try to follow up yours. But I think you can add more description and ideas about it. But for all, it's a really great done of you, Cynthia!

[Linear]

This is by far the best piece of writing I have seen from you, It's truely amazing, fantastic from such a young mind, Wow is all I can say, really well done Cynthia

[Chelsea]

I liked it. A neat idea of more than just leaves falling, the falling of humanity! A cool topic!
A suggestion...... Add a bit more description, just tell us a bit more of what's going on. I also noticed a few grammar problems, if you'd like me to point those out?!?!
A nice story. You really had me thinking! You should do a follow up for this one!

[Midday_Mystery]

This is extremely emotional and it is very deep.... You did a marvellous job on this Keep up the great work you are very talented

[Frantzuu]

wowwwwwwwwwwwww this one hell of a write. SO much emotions evoked in this piece. This is a great poem, I read it out loud as if I was acting it out and it sounds so good. Great job, one of my favorites by you. :D

[Short.Nerd]

I like this :)

Great job! Keep up the good work.

[Frankie Nguyen]

I really liked this. It reminded me of a poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

[Calypso]

I personally love the fall. There's nothing in the world like it. I'm bias (my birthday is in October) but the fall is my most favorite time of year.
On the flip side studies have shown that more deaths happen in November and October. I guess it seems like the death of the world and people feel like dying...