Remembering You

*sigh*

Remembering you...
Makes me so sick,
so sick that I regret,
to leave you...

Remembering you...
Makes me cry,
crying for the memory,
that I hold you tight.

Remembering you...
Makes me hate,
hating for who I am,
the me,
who dislikes you.

Why?
Why did I go away?

Why?
Why did I hate you before?

Why?
Why am I doing this?
Remembering you...

Author's Note

I don't mean to spoil the feeling of Valentines!! Don't get me wrong, but I just can't think of something sweet now, please understand it :(

Reviews

[KAREN]

I liked the emotions put into this poem! Great job!!

[Chelsea]

You didn't spoil my Valentines day! You reminded me of the fact every bodies Valentines Day may not be as great an romantic as others!
I think your poem states that when you love somebody and it breaks that you can't help but remembering them...
Love couldn't exist without hate- Just something to get you thinking!!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

no go right ahead and do what you want with valentines day! it sucks!
and love will hurt in the end, that what i have learned from my experiences.
i'm sorry you had such a hard time... i really sympathize. nice poem though

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow..this is some intense poetry.
Its very lyrical as well. You wrote
with a lot of emotion.

[Calypso]

Today I was thinking of the boy who I loved. I miss him greatly and thinking of him bad me sick to my stomach. I want to cry thinking of him now.
Well written poem.
I know how you feel.

[Frantzuu]

This poem is simply but deep with a strong moral. V-day can be good for some and bring back bad memories for others. Great write. :D

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is very well written! One of my favorites!

[Frankie Nguyen]

I love this poem. I'm not really into valentines day anymore because, I never have seen the point in it. I believe they shouldn't set aside just one day for making someone feel loved. It's stupid. So you didn't spoil anything for me (: I love the emotions in this poem. Keep writing for sure (:

[Roxi L]

It is a good poem. I am not one for valentines day eaither so...

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Broken~

[hannajade]

Oh yes, I understand it. Valentimes is kind of a lame holiday(no offence to people who like it) and the word 'love' can be over used so i think that it is perfect!