A Kiss

Slowly in the mist,
you held my hands,
looking in my eyes,
fill with love,
as you whispered,
into my ears,
soft and low,
'I love you'.

You put your arms,
around me,
and slowly bent down,
to give me,
a perfect kiss...

Author's Note

What do you think? This is only an imagination of me how a kiss should be, and I haven't even go through anything a like,so this may be no real, well, but....

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

It's really charming, sweet and romantic! It's really adorable~ This is every single girl's dreams! I hope this will come true on you too!

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet, it's adorable!

[Kimberly]

Very sweet and romantic. It may not be realistic but it's what we would like those perfect kisses to be like.

[Loner]

Short and sweet but has a real magical and romantic touch to it.
Awesome write.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write, as per the prevailing conditions around..!!

[Akshat♥]

nice...really nice..
soft touch to it..
short and sweet...

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This is very sweet and I thin you portrayed the magic of a first kiss wonderfully! When you recieve your first kiss, I pray it be magical for you like this poem is!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet and to the point.
Not one wasted emotion.
Nice!

[Frantzuu]

What a cute poem. lol
Valentines Day is here. :)
Awesome write.

[Chelsea]

So sweet! A lovely poem and great timing with Valentines day!
I love how you picture this perfect kiss, I think every girls dream! I hope this comes true for you----