Fake

Fake

A Poem by Cynthia

What if my life is just a waste of time? Just wasting time......


It seems I have no real friends, its just fake. Fake smile ; fake laugh; fake secrets; fake handshakes......

There is nothing I can tell them, they just laugh and bully me, and with no encouraging. I don't mean they should play fair, but I don't want to be hurt ever again, not even once.

© 2011 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
its not as poetic as I think it'll be, cause its nothing I can explain, and I am feeling so hurt whenever I look back, and I just wanna to cry so much!
I don't know should I write more so you really know whats going on, but just... whatever.

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Very upsetting to read this heartfelt poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was definitely a good display of emotion and it is very good to vent, in fact, writing poetry is probably the best way to vent! I applaud that, good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes it helps just writing it all down. Seems to help get the negative emotions out were you can see them and not feel them so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very, very relatable poem, but i think you can keep going with this. just let your emotions tell the story

Posted 13 Years Ago


Emotions over flowing in this poem! go on and write, write write! Getting lost in your writing maybe what the doctor ordered! Well written poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great emotions flowing! Writing about your feelings can help you heal, nice Job!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Life is just complicated. Great poem though :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very brave write-a good start to heeling the hurt. My thought is f_ _k them! People who hurt and bully have there own inward hurt that causes them to act out inappropriately. Hang in there-take the high road!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lifes hard, theres no doubt about it. We have to deal with many kinds of pain and it sucks.
I'm sure it will get better....just do what makes you happy.

btw: this poem is great, very simple, but it expresses your feelings well!

Posted 13 Years Ago


cool, i feel the same sometimes, i suppose that is why religious people are religious, ya know, sense of meaning and purpose. Before I just felt like I was trundling along and nothing really being significant, but now :D I FEEL ALIVE.....sort of

Posted 13 Years Ago



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