Terribly Wrong

I need some care,
I need some love,
I need some encouraging,
I need something,
to make me feel better.

I've never feel so wrong,
so terribly wrong,
I am so sick,
so sick of something,
something I can't tell.

I feel so empty,
I feel nothing,
but yet something,
stick in my heart.

I can't describe,
what I need now,
just some love,
just some care,
love from my friends,
care from my family.

Something terribly wrong is happening to me......

Author's Note

It is what i am feeling now, please dont say anything nagative to me now, i feel terrible. And I ma so sorry for the days i close my account, and i am not reviewing anything! I hope you will forgive me......

Reviews

[Moflo]

This is definitely a very emotional piece and I think the words aid your cause. Nice write.

[Kaiodem]

This really struck my heart. I have felt this way, but not about staying away for a few days of this website. lol, I didn't know that thats what caused this poem, but I like this poem. Please, don't feel bad for not reviewing things on days. Everyone needs to stray away from the computer every now and then.

[Sunflower 20]

this is really sad, and so strongly felt. nice job. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I can feel your miserey! I hope you don't close your account, and I hope you'll find someone to talk to, here if you need an ear. just send me a private meeseage! Your poem was written great!

[jazmin]

closer your what?!?!?!?!?! no, no, no, no!!! this is a joke!!! But anyways if you feel bad you can always talk to me. :)

[Short.Nerd]

Very good.