Terribly Wrong

I need some care,
I need some love,
I need some encouraging,
I need something,
to make me feel better.

I've never feel so wrong,
so terribly wrong,
I am so sick,
so sick of something,
something I can't tell.

I feel so empty,
I feel nothing,
but yet something,
stick in my heart.

I can't describe,
what I need now,
just some love,
just some care,
love from my friends,
care from my family.

Something terribly wrong is happening to me......

Author's Note

It is what i am feeling now, please dont say anything nagative to me now, i feel terrible. And I ma so sorry for the days i close my account, and i am not reviewing anything! I hope you will forgive me......

Reviews

[Frankie Nguyen]

I'm hoping you feel better soon

[Calypso]

I wish you the best of luck in life. Let's just hope this is a runt you're going threw.

[KAREN]

Hope you feel better. Your poem is sad and depressing, just the way you feel, but is written with feeling!

[hannajade]

aw I am very sorry to hear that.
but this poem is probably one of your best! you can really feel the emotion that was behind the pen..
I hope that you feel better soon. go for a walk alone and listen to the wind, or make yourself a hot chocolate and relax, those are things that help me feel peacefull when I am upset....

[Norma M Sutton]

I've been there too. Am still there to some extent. ((((hugs))))

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sometimes we need to take care of ourselves. It doesnt make us selfish people.
You have to be at your best to help others. Take it easy and dont beat yourself up.

[JanieB]

I really feel for you just now Cynthia.
Please keep writing and expressing your feelings.
Don't apologise hun, you just take real good care. If you want to have a private chat, please inbox me. x

[SOUL LESS]

I do feel like that sometimes...but I usually keep it to myself. I would maybe write a story about a lonely, ill- treated kid...me representing the protagonist, usually a girl...lol.
It's my way. Stay drunk on writing so that reality cannot destroy you. It'll pass though, friends aren't that bad.:)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Relax and smile..!!! It does happen..!!!

CHEER UP..!!!

[Alicia™]

Aww, cheer up! You don't have to do this way. Just put a :) on your face and know that you're not alone. I'm here for you if you ever want to just talk.