Terribly Wrong

I need some care,
I need some love,
I need some encouraging,
I need something,
to make me feel better.

I've never feel so wrong,
so terribly wrong,
I am so sick,
so sick of something,
something I can't tell.

I feel so empty,
I feel nothing,
but yet something,
stick in my heart.

I can't describe,
what I need now,
just some love,
just some care,
love from my friends,
care from my family.

Something terribly wrong is happening to me......

Author's Note

It is what i am feeling now, please dont say anything nagative to me now, i feel terrible. And I ma so sorry for the days i close my account, and i am not reviewing anything! I hope you will forgive me......

Reviews

[Kimberly]

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to my read requests. With school, work, and my mom in the hospital I haven't had a lot of time to work on my writing or go online. I hope that you are feeling better now, though.

[Sweets]

Nicely written
so sad and straight from the heart..

[Loner]

U are a true gifted write Cynthia God bless u !
Awesome write !

[Coyote Poetry]

We all need to be needed and loved. I could feel the emotion of wanting someone to show care and love in this poem. A strong ending to a very good poem. Love is a two way street. Sometime we must be the giver of love and if we are lucky. Our reward will be the gift of love and friendship.
Coyote

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sad poem. You just need to talk to your friends and family and know that they still love you and care for you.

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

If you need someone, you can always message me. Sometimes we just need a friend to listen... my ears, dear friend, are always open to your words.

[sarah]

This is a really great don't feel so terrible!

[Ashley Myers]

even when you feel that no one loves you.....YOU ARE LOVED!!!

[Linear]

We all grow, we all feel and we all live in a world so full of ever changing things, some for the better many for worse. Maybe whats happening to you is not a curse

[Chelsea]

This is so sad :( I hope you're feeling better!!
And trust me lots of people will care--- just give them a chance :)