The Man, The Woman

Maybe it was just too ordinary, which made it weird, I understood that I had gone through lots of days like this, but this was just too normal. The man which had weeds in his luggage seemed too well prepared for a fight, as I tried to remember how he looked like, he just seemed like people in movies who were a pro killer!

I got to admit, that's weird, he was weird : He was well dressed for fight, all in black, perfect suit for a night fight ; and he was very careful on answering question, and....

No, he couldn't be a normal person, he could not be.

Maybe I was just being too sensitive, maybe it was a random incident, there was nothing linked to anything alike....

Whatever, I was just a cab, not a spy, agent, or whatever it is, just concentrate on your job! I alarmed myself.

Just as I was still obsessing on this, a middle aged woman raised her hands rapidly, I stopped my car near the New York Marriott Marquis Time Square, “so weird” I mumbled to myself, why every passengers I drive a ride for was that strange? I looked at the woman, without shopping bags just a simple bag, I sighed to myself, strange.

The woman climbed on the taxi, and puffed, she seemed too tired or something. “ west 50^th street, please”

I nodded silently, and without a word, I started driving, but actually, I was peeking at the woman, she had a hair of beautiful brown which was a bit of red as well, maybe she dyed it.

The woman looked much younger than she looked when I approach her, she was smiling.

The woman smiled a bit “ Sir? Think if its Okay to drive faster?” I mumbled lowly to myself “ another drive faster- passenger”

The woman smiled wryly, but a light flashed through her eyes “ I am a bit of in a hurry.”

I sighed, but still nodded “ understand ma'am.”

The drive wasn't long, as soon as I dropped the woman down, and I was ready for another ride, something caught my sight, the woman sneaked into a dark street, I looked at where she went in, and I wait, maybe.. another criminal or something?

But as long as I waited, no one was there, but a man walked out.

Quickly, I walked in to the street, and all I saw....

Was a suit of cloth and red colored hair the woman worn......

See what do u think.

Author's Note

So, what do you think? This one is written by me, hope you like it.

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

It's getting very interesting!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Like it..!!

[Kimberly]

Good story. This is an interesting concept to tag team a short story like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting story. I saw a few cross dressers in my time. Some could trick you and you would never know unless they told you. A very good chapter. Thank you.
Coyote

[Frantzuu]

There are a few errors as mentioned in the comments, but I think you have something good going on here, i'd love to read more. :D

[hannajade]

a few changes could be made, but I really liked this chapter:)
I would love to read more:)

[Linear]

Well apart from the errors in your grammar (Dis-jointed english) I like the way you write it holds a certain charm that makes me keep reading. Well done (died is dyed)

[Calypso]

There are a few ting errors and I think you could change what Billie says when he says 'another drive faster- passenger'. It's too rhetorical.
Now with that said I would like to tell you that I believe this book is the best you have wrote. I'm always on the edge of my seat because I want to read more. Please send me a reading request when you can!

[Roxi L]

I few grammical errors. I had a rythem going in the beginning and I read it like that haha. I like the chapter. It was short and sweet.
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