I am Not The Liar

I am not the liar!
When can you trust me?
She is the one, not me!
I don't lie,
I never have,
it is her,
who dares to lie,
right in front of you,
I can't see you to death.

She tried to trap you,
so she can kill you,
out of people's sight,
then she will tell eveeryone,
I did it,
its not fair for me!

The liar is she,
not me,
can't you trust me,
one more time?
She tried to kill you!

~Even you can survive for the first time, it will happens  over and over again

Author's Note

What do you think for this one? I think thats not good, how bout you?

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good Work...!!

[Undying Glory]

This was well-written, those feelings here sure are potent! I sure like how you've ended this poem a lot! Nice job

[Akshat♥]

nicely done...nice way to say "trust me"..
good work:)

[reminder]

Very intense. Reads like an adventure. I rea;;y like it! Well done!

[Marie Harrison]

Love it! What a poem of angst and pure rage.