Invisible Energy, Killing... me

Some invisible energy,
was pushing me down,
slowly, slowly, slowly,
as I screamed for help,
its' hand,
placed on my throat,
and lightly squeezed it,
as asound like bell laughed,
 I found myself dying.

The invisible energy,
was coming from my body,
NO!
I am now killing myself,
I tried to shut the system down,
but it kept coming out,
while it was swallowing me in,
I squeezed my eyes shut,
readying for the last moment,
of what I called 'life'

Author's Note

I really hope its working the way I think it will be, so please tell me what you feel afterwards, and, heres the riddle, what fo you think 'it' is? Theres no right answer, just tell me what is your guess!

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

I'm totally confused and befuddled. I haven't a clue.

[Sarusai Hiryu]

stiffing grief? pain? hurt? guilt? self-loathing?
I can't even begin to imagine. No one can, except you - because you wrote it.

[Marie Harrison]

Someone choking? Let me know please....loved the poem.

[Calypso]

Very different look on suicide.

[reminder]

Intense and real. I like the structure and word choice! Well done!

[Frantzuu]

This is beautiful, I love the feeling it gives the reader as if everything is happening so fast and so unexpected. Great write

[QC]

Perfect. Absolutely perfect. (: great job!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It made me imagine a person who is carrying a serious emotional issue
and had their pinned up chi stop flowing.....taint itself from their dark
emotions...then destroy them from within.

[Roxi L]

Sounds great. I love the description and the feeling that comes out of it. I have a snilar poem and it's titled life.
Writing keeps the dream alive
Never

[Linear]

Sometimes our own stupidity and prejudice can strangle us, leave us ostracised from others, thats what i got from your poem. well done :-)