Invisible Energy, Killing... me

Some invisible energy,
was pushing me down,
slowly, slowly, slowly,
as I screamed for help,
its' hand,
placed on my throat,
and lightly squeezed it,
as asound like bell laughed,
 I found myself dying.

The invisible energy,
was coming from my body,
NO!
I am now killing myself,
I tried to shut the system down,
but it kept coming out,
while it was swallowing me in,
I squeezed my eyes shut,
readying for the last moment,
of what I called 'life'

Author's Note

I really hope its working the way I think it will be, so please tell me what you feel afterwards, and, heres the riddle, what fo you think 'it' is? Theres no right answer, just tell me what is your guess!

Reviews

[Athena Ramos]

what i got is the 'it' is the person's depression.
it kept eating the person and drove him/her to suicide.
that's what i got :D
this is really nice! :)

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed ..... i think its either depression, pain or suicidal tendancy
in a person ..... i am sure its going to be a wrong answer but even then i gave it a shot !

[Greg Skura]

Sometimes it feels like life is squeezing the life out of us. Well Done!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good shot..!!!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really interesting and tough!

[Kimberly]

This is a good poem. I like the mystery of it.

[AloysiaVerben]

Um... I'm not even going to try and guess what 'it' is :P. A good poem anyway. :)

[Short.Nerd]

Amazing job! (:

[Sweets]

This is beautifull
You added a lot to the intense in here
Great work!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very intresting poem!