Ends Now

Stop,
I don't want to be with you.

Never,
I am not going to love you.

No,
this is real.

Trust,
trust me I don't love you.

Hate you,
I hate you.

Ends,
speech finished,
now.

Author's Note

This is something VERY new to me, and I dont know do it work out well, so please really tell me what do you think.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

I'm not entirely sure, but this poem sounds like it was written by a person who is in love, but is also in denial. It's interesting...

[Coyote Poetry]

A very direct poem. Love isn't never that easy. We want too much then we want too little. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[reminder]

Emotional, gutsy and intense. This is a universal theme- you expressed it powerfully! Well done!

[Call Me Blu]

Nice work. I like the short snappy emotion. Almost like whoever was saying this was talking to herself, trying to convince herself. Great emotion.

[Undying Glory]

nice work, this was really well-written! you know the lines with the most impact are the lines with the fewest words. since all your lines have very few words this was very impactful! nice job!

[Moflo]

This was pretty good. The pacing definitely aids your theme.

[QC]

wonderful. I really get the emotion. Well done. You captured the feelings very well. Just... so good.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This has serious edge.
Hardcore Slam Poetry.
It would bring down the house!
I'd love to see it live.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Really nice job, keep up the good work~

[Short.Nerd]

I agree with Kelsie Stark. Its very straight forward. I like it. Nice job (: