A Dream To Be Real

Just a dream

How I wish,
this dream is true,
To be in your arm,
and kissing you.

But its a dream,
not reality,
I will always wake,
from my imagery world,
reality is a pain,
that need to be face,
every single day.

I hate to tell you,
I want you back,
cause its me,
who pushed you away.

How I wish,
this dream is true,
I will be in your arms,
kissing you,
wont it be perfect,
if its real?

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Beautiful poem and well expressed

[Loner]

Beautifully expressed !

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

One can surely make it true..!!!!

Give it a try..!!!

Good one..!!!

[Kimberly]

It's good.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really lovely!

[Marie Harrison]

Solid A +++
Great poem!

[Moflo]

Very good display of emotion here. Solid poem with a good flow and pretty good rhythm. I liked it.

[Call Me Blu]

I understand 100%. And in fact you have inspired me to write a poem, so thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

Those dreams keep us hoping. A very good poem. Life allowed us to want things that seem out of our reach. Funny part if we reach for nothing. We will wished we did. A excellent poem with a very good ending.
Coyote

[Linear]

Sweet love, sweet poem, some really good lines