Death to Me

Death is the end,
of every life,
like me,
the same old man,
living with out hope,
yet with a spark,
I am now dead.

Death is easy,
when you
really mean it,
now I am dead,
I feel nothing,
other than the peace.

Author's Note

To Jess, another death poem, cheerful?
To everyone: Yes, I am writing death poems again, it seems like I have written too much happy poems or love poems and just abandon what I love most! Writing Death Poem!

Reviews

[underwriter]

you should write what you feel led to write, dont force yourself to write something that your not pasionate about. although it is good that your branching out and trying new things!
nice write! well done!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

If everyone could leave in peace...
it would be a perfect world.

You are on to something. :)

[Jibey]

This is a dead end subject

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

True Picture..!!

[Linear]

There is no glory in death, just an empty place, a feeling of loss that may never be filled by any other

[Jessica]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww man, I guess that i have said the wrong thing. i ..................... Fine,i will tell you t school tomorrow.

[Coyote Poetry]

Death is the end here on Earth. Could next place be better? Death is not so easy. We thirst for one more touch and a few more words on a death bed. How many people desire forgiveness at their end. Not from God. From people they left with disappointment. A interesting poem. I seen death coming and taking of souls. Only one was ready in my lifetime.
Coyote

[Moflo]

Lol sometimes it helps to write about death, its very deep and really gets you thinking. I like the old man analogy but you can maybe add some to it and make it a stronger image.