Death to Me

Death is the end,
of every life,
like me,
the same old man,
living with out hope,
yet with a spark,
I am now dead.

Death is easy,
when you
really mean it,
now I am dead,
I feel nothing,
other than the peace.

Author's Note

To Jess, another death poem, cheerful?
To everyone: Yes, I am writing death poems again, it seems like I have written too much happy poems or love poems and just abandon what I love most! Writing Death Poem!

Reviews

[Loner]

Surprises me that at such a young age ..... u feel what death is .....
really good piece.

[Kimberly]

I actually quite like this one. It's different. I like different. I like that you're exploring that death can be peaceful. To me, death is something almost to look forward to as long as one has lived.

[Call Me Blu]

Very nice and i take a small confidence that your grammar has tremendously improved. This makkes it easier to read, and gives this poem just the right edge. My favorite so far

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really strong and dark!

[Dalebear]

Good poem

[Short.Nerd]

Amazing job!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is true..death is what makes us feel piece. I really liked this poem. I would say that death is eternal sleep...because when you die...you its like you fell into a deep sleep..one that you can never get out of...I thought you did a good job on this poem. I think your love poems are just as good as this poem as well...but it's cool to see that you have made a change in your writing. Thanks for sharing. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well expressed!

[Calypso]

I think you should elaborate on this and made it longer. Nevertheless its good and true. When your older sometimes death is a blessing.

[E.H. Monroe]

Get your peace on. Bring on the eternal sleep. We all end up in the same place.

So let's get drunk.

Good work