Mixture Of Feeling

Mixture Of Feeling

A Poem by Cynthia
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Something I feel 2day

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Soon,
the feeling of regret,
will come back,
nothing can cover,
the things I've done wrong,
over and over again,
however,
regrets didn't cover,
any feeling.

I want to express,
the mixture of feeling,
that no words can explain.

The mixture of feeling,
is killing me again and again,
I can't tell anyone,
how I am feeling.

© 2011 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
It sort of a feeling I have after I hurt so much people's feeling.

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yes i have had this same situation so many times. so many feelings, its hard to express them all at once, thats why i never run out of things to write, because there are always new feelings to write about and new ways to do it. nice poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


ah but most of the time what we see as our worst hurts on others are not seen that way by them. It IS hard not to feel badly about it though. Perhaps the best way to put the hurt aside is by reaching out to others when they need you. Sometimes a smile is the best gift a person can receive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


One of your best pieces. The depth of trying to express what cannot be expressed with the words that we have in any language.

Well done, the skill and idea level is on the serious rise

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hurting someones feelings can make you feel BAD, saying sorry isn't always easy, but when you do and they forgive it's sweet relief! Great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


It hurts a lot when you're the bad guy - you have to apologize and forgive yourself. Nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful. Emotional and intense. Most of the time, feelings cannot be expressed with words and those mixed feelings are being buried inside of your heart and stay silent for a long time- which can get quite painful. Brilliant piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is serious intense work.
These kinds of feelings are hard to face.
Bravo.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have seen others and myself use poetry as a good way to release anger and tension. It is a much better way to get your feelings out than going crazy. Keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You need to let go of your guilt. Good for you for expressing yourself this way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Pretty good. Nice job

Posted 13 Years Ago



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