Come Back Soon

Come Back Soon,
my voice cracked,
as I say so,
I know you won't be back,
thats just a lie,
to cover my pain,
by my smiles,
by my hugs,
but my heart,
was broke silently.

Author's Note

Wel, do you like it? Bit of strange, right?

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Short, but sad! Good job!

[Short.Nerd]

Nice job (:

[Marie Harrison]

Cool! I like it.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Really sweet, I liked this - great job, keep it up!~

[Call Me Blu]

Very good concept, however I have noticed that grammar is not your strongest forte. I'm not sure if it is because you aren't very fluent in english, or if you just hate grammar(like me) but I think it would definitley take you from good to great

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This reminds me of either someone saying good- bye to a loved one or a store owner? But either way, Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Not a strange poem. Just words expressing emotion of a moment. The mind knows when the end is here. A very strong and sad poem. A goodbye can close a door on a friendship. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jibey]

The simple plea is affecting and speaks of that sad ache we can all get when we say goodbye to a loved one...

[Moflo]

I like it...really exposes inner emotions and shows what poetry should be, a confession where the page hears all with acceptance. Good write.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I reminds me of Southern culture, where people can be rude
while being the most polite. Nice contrast of emotions.