Without Inspiration

Wanna to go through writers block and my brain finally squeexe this out.

Who Knows What I'm Doing?
Alll the things seems not right,
what am I doing?
why I keep sitting there,
with a pen,
in my hand?
Why can't inspiration,
go into my brain?
Come here,
my inspiration,
inspired me,
no,
they are not here,
where are you!
I need you to live!

Author's Note

Yes, I am finding hard to go through the no inspiration thing, and I totally need to PULL myself together before or can write this poem! I know, thats not a good poem, but what do you think?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When I can't write. I go to the great writers. Read their words. Music can help. Listen to a Leonard Cohen or Neil Young. Can make you think of something good to write. A very good poem. My favorite way to revive the mind. A dictionary. Find some words to excite the mind and create new poetry.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i love how you called upon inspiration, what a captivating poem!

[E.H. Monroe]

Pleading with the muse to breathe into you actually becomes poem itself. Almost like a complint to the creative side of you.
Very interesting indeed

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

I hate when that happens- I have it alot, it sucks but usally listening to music helps. Or reading

[No regret]

just go for a walk . n don try to be inspired! just notice , what is happening around you . think about your school dayz n i promise you will laugh on urself . just Relax n don go out with ur pen n notebook this time. n ya just like coyote said read n listen good music but not to get inspired don make ur mind to be inspired at the time u want . That`s Cruel heheh . Have fun

[OT]

When I'm uninspired I read, or find something random I've not really thought of before - go for a walk - look around maybe! find one picture/stanza and work around it! the strangest things can inspire!! keep writing! and reading!!

[Jibey]

An uninspired inspiration *grins*

[Loner]

A bit raw but true portrayal of an uninspired writer.

[Linear]

Look around you, look at nature, look at even man himself and the things he does for good or evil, and inspired you will become, your poem is good we all search for something to write, some lines that will turn out to be our one true masterpiece, keep on writing

[sarah]

writers block sucks!

[Moflo]

Nice write. I'm feeling the same way right now. Nicely done.