My Son

Come Home,
back to my arms,
so I can love you,
My baby,
even you were gone,
from my side,
to search for your dreams,
but I won't block you,
just go for yourself,
son,
you always remember,
I will support you,
and I will come,
if you need me

Author's Note

I don't know is there what a mom will think, but I hope I got it right.

Reviews

[Linear]

Is that what moms do, i'm sure they do, good poem

[Undying Glory]

and i'm sure this is exactly what a mom thinks. although like you, what would we know for sure? (at least for now) this was very nice work here, keep this up!

[E.H. Monroe]

A hammer indeed to the chest of the prodigal son. Short and sweet and those little issues with length or power are quickly starting to fade. Start to over write, expand a bit into the longer stuff. see what you come up with.

Don't be scared of judgemental prickbags. They aren;t going away. So improve and kick em while they're down.

"That's that s**t right there."-General U.S. Grant

[Marie Harrison]

Great job, just the right amount of emotion.!

[Call Me Blu]

Great poem. To be honest the pessimist cynical part of me (Basically 99.9%) was expecting some sappy mothers day card. Not at all, great job.

[Short.Nerd]

Amazing job!! (:

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem, A mother's love is awesome!

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

this is one inspiring poem..and one inspiring and supportive mother to his:))

[Jami Nicole]

Your poem makes me want to tell my mom that I love her and we rarely say that in our household. Thank you for that. Great write. :)

[AloysiaVerben]

It's a beautiful poem and the words ring true. Great write. :D