My Son

Come Home,
back to my arms,
so I can love you,
My baby,
even you were gone,
from my side,
to search for your dreams,
but I won't block you,
just go for yourself,
son,
you always remember,
I will support you,
and I will come,
if you need me

Author's Note

I don't know is there what a mom will think, but I hope I got it right.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Kimberly]

I think you do. Amazing perspective and great poem.

[Calypso]

Love it. It reminds me of the parable in the Bible of the lost son.

[Angel's Lady]

Absolutely the right words....a mother's job is never done, no matter how old the child.

Great write!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

You got it right. Nice job!

[Sarusai Hiryu]

even you were gone,
There should be a though after even.
Only a mother could answer your question; I cannot say whether or no a mom would think thus.
However, the emotion you sought to to convey comes sweetly and clearly across

[HopelesslyDevoted]

awww so sweet!

[No regret]

this sweet Loving n caring. nice write

[Jibey]

A mother's heart is in those words

[Loner]

A bulls eye!
this is what a MOM is all about, lovely poem.