Someday

Someday,
everything,
will be settled.

Someday,
I will come back,
to your side,
full with pride.

I can't come back yet,
but it wont last long,
I need to do soemthing,
to prove to you,
I am worthy to love.

Someday,
I will come back,
and love you,
without regret

Author's Note

The word 'someday' suddenly pops in my head, and thats what I got afterwards.

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i think "someday" is something we all kind of think about a lot. yes, there are some times when we need to live in the moment, but if we do not look towards the future, than we may not have one "somday". all in all, i thought this was excellent!

[No regret]

amaizing , i loved n enjoyed .

[Jibey]

The simplicity of this makes it a winner...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thoughts well-woven ..!!

Good Work..!!!

[Linear]

This is just lovely

[E.H. Monroe]

definitely sweeta nd full of heart. Almost mixed with a feeling of low self worth. You need to wait till you think you're worthy can make this tragic real quick. Would love to see this opened up, get the background of the thing.

[Marie Harrison]

Sweet poem. I love the senitment in this poem. I like the word someday too, it shows your intention.

[Short.Nerd]

You have a typo up there but other than that the poem is very good!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This reminds me of two people who need to take a break from each other.
Thank you for sharing!

[Undying Glory]

this was great work, loved this! glad you decided to post this on here! this was powerful and sweet work. nice job!