Someday

Someday,
everything,
will be settled.

Someday,
I will come back,
to your side,
full with pride.

I can't come back yet,
but it wont last long,
I need to do soemthing,
to prove to you,
I am worthy to love.

Someday,
I will come back,
and love you,
without regret

Author's Note

The word 'someday' suddenly pops in my head, and thats what I got afterwards.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

I liked it good poem

[JanieB]

"Someday"..a good hopeful word.

[Alicia™]

That's a good poem!

[Kimberly]

I like this. I'd make each stanza the same number of lines if at all possible but that's the only suggestion I can make.

[sarah]

Wow! this is incredible! great write

[Calypso]

Well written. There is a sense of maybe to this poem. Maybe one day I'll love you again, maybe I'll come home one day.
Well written

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really lovely! Great job!

[Moflo]

I like this a lot...now that I've read it, I feel like you read my subconscious thoughts and put them onto paper. Hope is such a great thing, and hope is the best thing we have...great write.

[Call Me Blu]

besides the grammar problems, this is looking spot on. I like that you let ideas pop into your head, better to have your ideas be messy than forced and stiff. Can't force perfection.

[Sarusai Hiryu]

will be settled;
full of pride;
Other than that, You did quite well.