Maybe I'm Wrong, I am nothing special. Maybe I'm Wrong, I am just a person, who never get things right, who am I? Why am I here? Do I worth to live? Maybe I'm wrong, I am nothing special
it is amazing how you can express how many of us feel into a poem, you a truly talented and to be able to express your feelings through writing is amazing!
I feel the same way sometimes. Writing is the way that I escape these feelings because I know that maybe someone will read it and then I would make a difference. Don't let life get you down. Everyone is important. One person can make a difference!
Feeling nothing is s**t, my friend, it's like some goblin has snuck out at night and spirited away your own emotions; was b***h, but we all get it - for whatever, strange, reason. This is brlliant, I love it, keep up the good work!~
Nothingness...it's a terribly empty emotion:) It's like a dementor has sucked out your soul or something. Everything is made of plastic...distressingly fake and insignificant. This isn't a poem though...just expression.
It seems like you're just writing down a series of related statements or thoughts. I guess that's why it's so blunt? Mm I believe you should depict this character as somethin it's ot to get that metaphorical thing going.
Quick hits spoken softly in what seems like distress.
The "do I worth to live" doesn't terribly confuse, but a if it's stylistic, it would need to carry a meaning. If its a typo, edit and throw it back out at us.
Nice work and a great start toward a feeling poem.
Sorry everyone, but I didn't go on this site regularly, I also turn off my read request, but will be up as soon as I find this site... worth spending time on
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