Delete and Block

Why do you say it?
It really hurts me,
don't you know,
how rude you are?
I dont mean any harm,
but you force me to hate you,
by clicking delete,
and a simple 'block'

Author's Note

a writer online, minato namikaze, have say he hates my wriitng, and it sucks. I feel so bad! Not that the review is constructive, he just type 'I hate it'...... Lots of unfriendly words, and yeah, I delete him as my friend. But really, do I suck at writing that I should stop writing?

Reviews

[Jibey]

It sounds as though he should be called 'kamikazi' LOL It's upsetting when someone vents their negative feeling son you - but you did the best thing - block him and move on. Leave him to his problem and get on with writing what you enjoy. Constructive criticism is one thing, flaming is another..

Still... you wrote a good little poem as a result!

[Dalebear]

You are a good poet keep it up

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I think you can do so much more with this poem and I really wish you saw just how much potential I believe you have. All you have to do to make this better is add in some more descriptions. If you do that, it's an ace in the whole. ^^

[Marie Harrison]

Maybe he woke up with a bug up his bugaboo that day. I just ignore people who try to pull me down. Life's hard enough without people like that. Don't let him steal your joy of writing. Besides most people love your writing. I do.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

No way! There will always be critics that don't like your writing. This guy is just a plain jerk though because he could have just said "it could have been better if-" instead of being rude!

you showed him alright! I would have done the same.Anyway 8/10.

regards:
Minato Namikaze

pretty good. keep it up

[No regret]

u write for ur self n he writes for himself ,,, who we r to judge any1 ,every one here is to learn to share n to tell , Do wat u want to ok let them say let them do wat they want to be happy .

[Loner]

Dont u stop writing ever do u get that!
another awsome write ..... see he made u do it that is write yet another beautiful write as u always do.
Cheer up!

[Carolyn]

again it is amazing that you can express your feelings through poetry, don't let anyone's negative words damper your spirits for writing. The stuff i have read by you is trully amazing and he may have been jealous who knows but at least you won't have to deal with him again.

[Calypso]

I hate those type of writers.