Away From You- Best Way To Love You

For some reasons, I can feel what he feels. Every time he feel pain, it hurts my heart; everytime he feels happiness, I feel joy. It should be good, to feel what your lover feel, but I don't want it. Not a single bit of feeling what he feels.

Is not that Shaq isn't a good a cool guy, is because, I can't love him. I can't love him cause I love him, I can't ruin his life, I can't do anything that will hurt him, I can't.

Every time I kiss him, every time I care about him, I knew, I knew I am wrong. I knew I am wrong, I might be hurting him and...... Just not him.

I can die for Shaq, I can do anything for him. I believe he can do anything for me too, but I need to go, without a doubt. Now everything is this world stopped, I have left, I didn't leave a message, a letter, any last words, just gone.

My heart was a mess, I can feel it, I can't control my heartbeats and it was killing me, I knew he meant too much for me, that's why my heart hurts when I went away, every time I can't see him, my heart hurts.

I know I can't leave him, but the best way to love him is to leave......

Author's Note

What do you think? I don't know if I do good, please tell me.
Ignore grammer for this one please, I am still working on it.

Reviews

[Jamie]

It's sweet, sad, and very lovely....

[Short.Nerd]

its sweet but a little confusing

[OT]

very sweet, yet sad but you should indeed continue it!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great idea for a story, I hope you pursue it!

[Calypso]

This is sad. I guess love can tell like this at times.

[Arsenic Nemesis]

This is really sweet, just the amount of depth and emotion into it made me b'aw. Very nice indeed, keep it up!~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is quite amazing. You poured out your heart and
scraped the bottom of the barrel.

[Call Me Blu]

Love the way you managed to still keep wa sort of poetic feel in this story. It definitley needs a little grammer work, but the overall idea is great!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Expressed with lovely feelings and was written brilliantly~

[Jibey]

This was written with nice feeling - a kind of innocent teenage girl's crush