Wedding Confusion

For Prompt

Looking out the window,
she secretly sighed,
she is the bride,
of tonight,
but why can't she smile?
She whispered to herself,
which I heard right by her side,
'I am not sure if I love him."
I sighed as well,
as I flew to her side.
I whispered
' don't cry, it's ok.'
as the wedding bell rang,
I turned away,
back to the hell,
where I belong

Author's Note

isn't the last sentence weird? I don't know how to end it! Help, please?

Reviews

[Allison]

I really like the concept, or the 'plot' I guess you could say, for this poem. In my opinion, the last sentence is a bit odd. I say this because the poem explains why the bride is having some trouble, but then the last sentence says the second character (the character that says to the bride 'don't cry, it's okay) turns back to his/her own hell. If the bride turned, then it would make sense because she is having this love trouble, but the poem doesn't explain how this second character is also having trouble. i think, if you made the bride turn away instead of this wo/man turning, it might make more sense. or, you could elaborate more why this second character is in her own hell.
Sorry if I seem too technical and/or harsh. I'm actually usually not like this, but I just felt like I had a lot to say this time, haha. Anyways, alter this if you want, but I'm not saying you should or have to. Any way you have it, I believe it is a really beautiful poem, with a tinge of sadness.

-Pokie

[Athena Ramos]

are you the maid of honor? if you are then it makes sense :D
your friend the bride, is marrying someone you love but she doesn't even love the guy. that's why you flew back to "hell"

or maybe your the demon! devil! you made someone marry someone they don't love :P you persuade them :D hehehe~~

but i'm not so sure either :P

[Sweets]

.__. the last line kinda confused me
I think it would better be "to the heart
of where I belong"
Mine sounds creepy as well =/
Dunno, maybe you can fix it :)