Feeling Love

Gazing in your eyes,
I felt love,
running down my throat,
feeling love,
you give me everytime,
I gaze down your eyes.

Feeling Love,
feeling  your love,
I love you,
everyday and time,
it keeps having more,
the feel of your love.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Sweets]

This is wonderful...but the last two lines...maybe you should fix them.
"It keeps increasing,
more and more as each second passes
the feeling, of your love"
Maybe you should exchange them with the lines I wrote above! :D
Good luck!

[.]

so lovely & wonderfully sweet :)

:)

[Linear]

I think it's sweet, this love you hold, this love you try to eloquently express, and whats more, you do it well

[reminder]

I like the repetition it creates nice rhythm and a kind of intensity. Well done!

[al25]

Simple and I like it. Great use of repitition.