You, I Love You

I enjoyed your kisses,

as you pushed your lips,

on my icy ones,

you burned my lips,

as you put pressure,

on my lips.

I enjoyed your hand,

as you took my hand,

hand by hand,

your warmth ran to mine,

your hands buried mine.

You never believed,

I am nothing worthy

but whatever happens

I love you.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[ravena]

it sounds like the person is scard of what might happen if they lost the person that they are kissing

[Jami Nicole]

A sweet poem with open feelings. It's great. :)

[Felipe]

simple and great, feelings are expressed openly, good job^^

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem with excellent feelings potrayed!

[Sweets]

This is so sweet :)
Short, simple, and great :)
It has a great meaning behind it :0
Keep on writing :)
and you'll hopefully have a great future ! :D

[Loner]

Now thats is what i call a good job and a sudden improvement
a beautiful sensual poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sweet and kind poem of love. Love made us content. Takes a moment of loneliness to know we need love of family and friends. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Loner]

The last stanza seems a bit confusing
the rest of the poem is very nice.