Hostage

Hostage

A Poem by Cynthia
"

Very new to me.

"

What have I done?

Why did you try to hurt me,

like I am your,

biggest enemy?

I haven't even seen you,

but you pointed a gun,

right by my head,

as the crowd screamed.


Police surrounded you and me,

frighted to take a step closer,

afraid you will shoot me,

you didn't care,

you held your gun tight

as you don't realize,

the police were ready,

to start the fight.


BANG!

I gasped in surprise,

as I saw you fell,

on the bloody floor,

with eyes closed.


I broke myself free,

our of your frozen arms,

I am no longer a hostage,

I am back,

into my lovely parents' arms.

© 2010 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
What do you think? I don't know what to say, never written anything same!

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Nice. It was written beautifully.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Straddles that fine line between poetry and storytelling...
A two thumbs up for the sheer originality of it...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is great discription ,while i was reading i can visualize the stills of your whole peom . it can be a gud song . awesome write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good description. NIce job

Posted 13 Years Ago


I saw you Fall, It's really good, very descriptive, and a little harrowing, thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Powerful and adventerous poem. I like that you're trying to break out of your comfort zone. I think it's a good thing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


okay emotional rollercoaster but confused at the end

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow...wasn't prepared for that~! Outstanding job. Very shocking and dramatic poem. Bravo Cynthia.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well written, just one spelling error! you,ve got guy instead of gun, first stanza. Great poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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