Dont Make me do it

Dont Make me do it

A Poem by Cynthia

Please,
although I know,
you are deeply in love with me,
but don't,
continue to love more,
cause I don't want to say,
'I hate you'.
Please?
Don't make me do it

© 2010 Cynthia


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It was short, but the point came out smoothly and easy. It's a beautiful poem, short and sweet. Beautiful work. Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Boy isn't that the truth! I love this one. Moving too fast scares me. I flee like the wind! Great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love and hate is a heart beat apart. Hard to control the emotion of love. It seem we give too much or not enough. Age teaches us to appreciate any affection received. I like the last line. A interesting poem. Your poem is dealing with the oldest question.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's kind of confusing to me. Great emotions though!

Posted 13 Years Ago


What does love have to do with hate? if someone loves you more how can what you feel turn to hate? the poem is contradictory to me, yet still a fine poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Bold and strong !
A great emotional punch.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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